Go bake yourself a fuckcake
to fall in love with,
the only words my tongue
will ever caress you with:
“I can’t be fucked to care”
Ahab was a clinical fool
to waste his last gasp,
when every single breath
that is taken can be used
to spit forth the wounding venom.
I would more than happily
fuck the gaping hole in your empty head,
if it weren’t for the thought that
my dick could very well
become infected with your drooling stupidity.
Oh, how easily the well worn words
“Self aggrandizing” slide off the tongue,
initially vaunted by a moron,
but taken up as a battle-cry
for we had the intelligence to see the irony.
Irony, ever heard the word?
Trust me when I say
it doesn’t refer whatsoever to
your downtrodden mother, pressing your clothes
before she spits your empty noise onto the streets.
To go hunting in a pack of fuckwits,
like a slavering cacophony
of single-celled life forms,
huddling fearfully, licking each others slime
in the hope of a fragment of intelligence.
Oh, so now I’m arrogant?
You better fuckin’ believe it!
For I worship the thought, the word,
the image from within that springs;
not from a tangled, single string of brainwashing.
But from the exploding atoms of imagination
that forever fills my mind with nuclear chaos,
I can dip into that well whenever I wish
without the crutch of a patronizing digitization,
droning my opinion for me at peak viewing;
not that a blithely ignorant cunt like you would know....
Author notes
Straight, blinding anger.
There is so many people and so many types of people getting right on my nerves of late that this can be dedicated to and is truly aimed at.
People who think they are superior, because they think they are some sort of "expert" just because they think their narrow opinion on a broad subject matter is the be all and end all. (Poetry, for example.)
People who think they are somehow special and deserve personal attention and want everything done specifically for them and have a distain for anything not personally created for them and them alone (Again, poetry, AP and the whole "pre-write/fresh write" situation).
People who just want to push their own personal spiritual/religous agenda, specifically those who amply forget some of the main tennets of their own supposed faith.
Society in general.
A few people VERY specifically, though I shall keep them to myself.
If any of this piece offends, even the Author's Notes, take the advise of the piece, go bake yourself a fuckcake to fall in love with, or as we are fond of saying where I come from....
"Away and lie in yer pish!".
(Sorry for the long, ranting notes).
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fuck man, this shit you wrote here was out of this world, you definatly have a shot in this contest muh man, keep up the good work... oh and if its not a prob with you, i play bass and sing in a band and i would like to turn this into a song
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Very strong and powerful words here, this reaks of pure and utter anger and discontect, I almost want to step back and apologise, incase it is me. Nicely done.
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What a great entry in the contest
best of luck to you
Delila
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Thank you very much. It was a fun piece to write. Always good to get it out of the system.
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yeah this is pretty cool, i liked the anger of it and the intellectual feel of your bitter insults.
one thing though... your notes made me feel that youre the sort of person who could possibly fit into the category of your targets. just a thought.
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Thank you very much.
As for fitting into one of those categories of people, don't we all to a degree at some point. However, I feel I must respond with a rebuttal, of sorts. Do I personally see myself as superior because I think I'm some sort of expert....no. Particularly when it comes to poetry. I barely consider myself able to write, never mind be anything good, so, expert? No. I don't see it.
As for pushing personal beliefs or agendas....whilst I will pipe up and state my opinion, yes, often I will do that, but push my beliefs on someone? Having no set belief as such, there isn't much I can push on anyone.
Do I fit into the category of the society that I attack? Personal circumstance would suggest otherwise, though that one is not for me to judge.
Can I be arrogant or am I arrogant? Well, hell, you probably got me on that one, I certainly can come across as that, thus the focus of irony in the piece, however I would say that I am probably more aloof and disconnected than arrogant. However, to counter that, we can often show signs of being that which we dislike the most. It is only human.
I'm rambling again, aren't I? Anyways, again, thanks for the comment, very thought provoking. (Sorry for the long reply).
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Speechless
This expressed real and true "blinding anger" and you said. I loved it, it made me feel angry too. Actually there are a couple people I should dedicate this too. And I completely agree with everything said in your poem and author notes.
This poem amazed me in an undescriptible way. It's unique, it's different, it's amazing.
I dont have a favorite part of it cuz the entire it captivated me. NICE WORK.
The best of LUCKS and thank you for entering this AMAZING and full of anger write. -
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Thank you very much. I was in a bit of a foul mood when this one surfaced and my writing has a tendency to be like that when I'm in a ranting mood.
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