Sitting in darkness
Leaned in bed of desires
Look at the infinity of moon
The solitude..the silence invaded me
Disturbing mentality
Time seems not to end
Stays...delays in passing.
Everything comes to mind
In a night to rest
Some of my memories
insist to remember.
longings..more longings
make part of history
heart stops to throb
only..Numbness.
Author notes
Prompt: Title: moonlight Memories
A contest entry
- closed for judging...LONELINESS. by Summer Dawn.
800 points, ended October 9, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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nice dark write.

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Good images. This seemed like a sad write which was kind of haunting. Good luck in the contest.

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the darkness is a good place
the moon is a wonderfull thing
wonderfull poem
tho lonly is not so wonderfull



