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You veil yourself

You veil yourself to no avail
you can never hide your true self

not even from me
nor from yourself

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  • grannyeri gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    No matter how hard one tries to cover their true self, they cannot hide it from themselves. THoughts well expressed in these few lines.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 7, 2007

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    A very hard thing to do, hide from yourself. Though we all seem to think we can from time to time. Deep meaning and thought provoking.
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