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Wasn't it a Bit of Luck

Wasn't it a bit of luck that I was born a baby duck?
I love you like a baby duck loves its first swim
I love you like a baby duck loves to dream of flight
I love you like a baby duck loves to romp in the marsh
I love you like a baby duck loves its mother's warmth
Wasn't it a bit of luck that I was born to love you?

Author notes

my life, my pride is broken
listening to Linkin Park




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  • dontbelong
    October 8, 2007
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    i love you like a baby duck loves to fuck. i love you.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 7, 2007

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    G'day Simply Waiting

    I like the intensity of this poem
    Very interesting images

    I would suggest though that you change the colour of your font as it is very hard to read bright yellow against white

    Stay safe
    ~Amanda