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I Need You

Couldn't help those facts

where the friends influenced you

My simple dreams won't hold me now

I need you now

Every passing night I'd sacrifice all my tomorrows

to have that one day back

Where the lies could not deceive me

and where betrayal was nothing but a clue

I could see it now

only me and you

You called me

I called you

the connections could never fail

One day the power went out

and went for a walk

bumped into you

just had a little talk

the talk turned into a conversation

the conversation turned into touching

the touching turned into kissing

the kissing turn into lust

The story chose to continue

and so it did

She was mine forever

nobody elses

She was as free as a bird

because that's just who she was.

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  • Vienna110
    October 18, 2007
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    awwwww this is a beautiful poem very sweet and sad! :{


  • Marilyn.
    October 17, 2007

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    I love how everything goes in sequence of order. I imagine that this what a girl that you cared for but now do not give a rats ass abt. good read.