Purple hues across the skyline
bring closure to this untamed day
darkness falls unto it's victim
fog rolls in upon it's prey
soon form dew drops sweet as wine
inviting new to come what may
sunlight gleaming through the darkened
stirring dusk out of the way
Yesterday left a moment in time.
A contest entry
- Anything by Virgoan.
450 points, ended October 26, 2007, 19 entries
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Comments
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Short and wonderful piece.
Well done.
Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
VIRGOAN
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really enjoyed the imagery in this. great work!
i would say more but my brain isnt working haha but i enjoyed reading it for sure
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Hmm... well I did like this but I think that it could be so much better with less repeated rhyming but more lines. It was just a little too short ... but other than that... it's beautiful
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I liked how you used similes and metaphores in this poem very great write, best wishes, michael <3
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really enjoy these types of contests don't know where most of mine fit in. Thanks for the oportunity!
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