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Night on a Lake

Like ribbons cross the sky,

 

the colors interloop in the

 

fading of sunset casting forth

 

 

early shadows of twilight and

 

 

of  twinkling stars in the sky.


 

The moon shines with silvery glow,

 

 

reflecting like diamonds

 

 

upon the ripples of the lake

 

 

sparkling with each lapping wave.


The deer prance among the pines

 

 

munching on tender shoots of grass

 

 

peaceful and serene are they

 

 

in the calm of the night.

 

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  • wiccanway
    October 7, 2007

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    very nice in every aspect. can truly find nothing to say other than you have done a beautiful job with this. thank you for sharing this with us.