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Bloodlust

Watching you,

Through eyes of ice.

Wishing you'd,

Turn and look in my direction.

The craving...

Is nearly too much to bare.

Shivers...

Roll down your spine..

Silently,

I walk up behind you...

And run a nail down your spine lightly.

Purring softly in your ear..

And I can see,

Under the pale moon light

Your body tense,

Against my touch.

You turn to look at me.

Eyes revealing a hint of fear...

Oh and such beautiful eyes they are!!

A sea green...

Revealing your every thought.

Not that I,

Would need to see them to know what it is your feeling.

I can hear your heart..

Quicken and stutter..

I know the power of my ageless beauty.

And I give you a sly knowing smile.

With lips the color of blood...

And eyes the color of a rose in full bloom,

I know you can't take your eyes off of me.

Seduction without words...

As I move in closer to you.

Running my hand,

Down your shoulder...

To your hand.

And play lightly with your fingers...

All the while,

Keeping your eyes locked with mine.

Instinctively,

You take a step back.

Such a silly human response.

And I step with you...

Not allowing you an inch of room.

Though you stand

At least four inches taller...

I hold no fear of you..

My eyes caress yours..

Sensual and sly.

While my hands roam over you,

Ever so softly.

Until I feel your body give,

Under my gentle but coaxing fingers..

And I take the last step.

Into you.

Under this perfect, clear, star drenched sky.

Murmuring words in an ancient tongue.

Soothing your soul...

And bring it closer to the surface.

Feeling you give in...

Wrapping your arms around me.

Smiling down on me.

I know you think,

That on this all so dark night,

You'll be getting a joy ride..

From this dark and wanton princess.

But I know,

It's not a ride you'd ever imagined.

And I lead you on...

Playing gently with your thoughts.

Until i'm close enough,

TO sink my teeth into that sensitive neck...

And as your body goes taught.

I hold you still...

Draining the life...

From your handsome form.

I wait until,

I hear your heart just barely.

And I let you go...

So that you slide to the ground...

Gasping for air.

And staring up at me.

Pure horror fills your eyes...

But there's an under layer of need.

And on a whim.

I decide to fill that need.

brushing my velvet skirts aside.

I kneel down before you...

Letting the blood run freely,

Down my satin neck,

I take a nail...

And slit a small cut,

Just under the wrist..

And hold it up to show you.

A playful smile,

Creeps along my lips...

Almost childish.

Filled with glee and amusement.

You whimper up at me..

Fear and want warring with each other.

And I hold my arm,

Up over your mouth.

Just out of reach.

So that the blood drips down,

Landing on your lips...

And the blunt of your chin.

Leaving you craving.

Begging.

Whimpering

And pleading for more.

After a few moments,

Watching you drift closer to the edge of death.

I bring my arm to your mouth..

And let you drink,

The eternal life from me...

Throwing my head back..

And letting out a savage cry.

As your body begins to take hold...

I pull you away.

Letting you fall back to the ground..

Whimpering and squirming..

I catch my breath,

And lean down close to your ear.

And whisper in a silky soft voice..

"You are now mine, Lover.

For all of time and past.
You belong only to me, My Lover. Till time it's self runs out"

And I press my wanton lips to yours...

Sealing the bond...as I leave you there...

To let your body die.

I walk away..

Slowly disappearing in the night...

Glancing back only once...

To smile at you knowingly.

And as I turn and disappear...

I know your eyes are on my back...

And once i'm in the shadows.

I whisper to your soul..

"I will come for you just before dawn My Lover."

And disappear into the darkness completely,

On this all Hallow's Eve night...

My night...

Author notes

This poem...was a freakin blast to write!! I know there's so much more I could do with it...but If I don't stop now...it's going to be like ten pages long!!! Hope you like!!! **winks**

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  • FleshnTears silver member
    October 10, 2007

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    Awesome

    This was so freaking awesome. It was so greatly written that I could actually see the scene as I read it flash through my mind. Freakin A...lol...So so Great. I loved it....


  • Knight70 silver member
    October 9, 2007

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    This is such a delicious horror write.

    I'm thrilled that you are adding to this. It's definitely book-worthy. Don


  • Little-Marshmallow
    October 8, 2007

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    Great poem liked how it changed from an almost innocent piece into a really powerful dark poem. Great Halloween poem Keep pennning my sweet sister and best of luck in the contest.


    • irishmidnight
      October 8, 2007
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      little marshmallow

      **grins** thanks sis...it was an absolute blast to write...it set off a fever ...**Laughs**


  • foryourowngood
    October 7, 2007

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    Wow this was awesome, its perfect for halloween or even an everyday read if you are into as much darkness as I am. Good luck on the contest.

    • irishmidnight
      October 8, 2007
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      foryourowngood

      I completely agree...I absolutely love these kinds of poems!! And they're so much fun to write...thank you greatly for your comment!!!


  • HaleyMary
    October 7, 2007

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    Wow, this was awesome. It started off really nice and sweet and sensual and as I read on, I was surprised at the turn to a horror theme. Very fitting write for the upcoming Halloween holiday. Good luck in the contest.

  • NewJerseyMan
    October 7, 2007
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    Wonderful

    So creepy, I love it!

  • Knight70 silver member
    October 7, 2007
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    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    That was INCREDIBLE!!! I had to comment on how brilliant this is before going to sleep. You brought the image to life!! It's enticing, yet horrifying. I would have died on the spot of sheer terror long before she pierced my neck. Amazing!! This is my favorite dark poem I have read in a while, and I sure do love to read this kind of stuff. You should be writing horror novels. I'd buy them in a heartbeat.

    • irishmidnight
      October 7, 2007
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      **laughs softly**

      **blushes** I'm so very glad you enjoyed the write.hun!! I absolutely LOVE writing like this...I can't seem to get enough of it!!! The sexxy, dark, menacing...horror filled words drive me wild...LOL!!! thanks so much for the heart felt comment!!!

      • Knight70 silver member
        October 7, 2007
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        smiling....

        Damn, that piece was a great read. Well, now I have a general idea of what I will write about for your contest.

  • near1202apocalypse
    October 6, 2007

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    Seductive and Awesome!

    This made me feel the seductive side of me. Very, very well done!!! Love it!!! Good luck in the contest cutie!


    • irishmidnight
      October 6, 2007
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      near1202apocalypse

      Thank you my sweet lover...lol...I had a blast writing it!!!...and thinkign of you...**grins wickedly**


  • Tarja
    October 6, 2007

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    Slightly longer than I usually prefer but so graceful and stunning. Everything from the picture to the title to the poem itself. You've done a very excellent job. I admire someone who can see the beauty of darkness and you obviously do. Good luck in the contest!

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