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Actions Speak Louder

Crimson petals adorn
cherry wood floors,
leading you to lavender
scented room filled with
luminous candles dancing
to sweet, mood setting music.

All day romantically decorating,
to make you feel special
after a hard day at work.
Words can never express
the way I love you,
my actions must prove
my undying love for you.

Beautiful features enhanced
by the flaming candels' shadows,
your soft lips begging to be kissed.
Relaxing aromas fill nostrils
awakening the senses while
our two souls become one.

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Prompt: To show you I love you

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  • Passionate Phoenix
    October 22, 2007

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    this was lovely, wonderful wording and great imagery. I loved the line 'soft lips, begging to be kissed' I can think of a few people from my past I can think of that for! lol well done and thanks for entering! xx


  • Forlorn Dreams
    October 7, 2007

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    This was a beautifully written poem. Very sensual and what I was looking for. I spoke so fondly of love, in the most intimate ways, but it held it in such a way that it was precious as it should be. Thank you for entering and best wishes!

    ~Kelcey