in the closet
he was lost
never knowing
how to talk
never able
to cry or call
as he sat there
for years and year
biting nails
weary eyes
counting circles
wearing disquise
no one will know
he was ever here
always forgotten
after all these years
bent over double
becoming weak
tears now streaming
down his cheek
didn't you see him
as you opened the door
some may see him
others ignore
for he is a ghost
of what was once real
a kind and scared
boy of fears
now hes a memory
that no one remembers
now he locks the door
for them, he'd ignore
and when you realize
he was shut out
it'll be too late
he'll foget himself
and he'll fade away
like the memory he used to be
his ghost will disapear
in his fear
scared of the dark
afraid f the light
now he drifts on
to the afterlife
you may try to catch him
but it'll be too late
for he is a ghost
locked by invisible chains
goo back to when
you last saw his face
remember your vow
to not forget his trace
remeber the handprint
left on the wall
remeber his cry
his call
remeber what you said
as he faded away
"dont worry,
mommy will always love her baby"
and before you forget
reach out your hand
into the closet
with hopes to mend
everything you have said
dont forget you place
dont forget you worried sound
dont forget his face
hold on tight
then let go
hes a big boy now
off on his own
A contest entry
- Dedicated to my father who just lost his own father(PREWRITES ARE WELCOME) by badddgirl.
550 points, ended October 16, 2007, 7 entries
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Comments
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Great write my friend
I want to be honest with you k. As a poet view this is very unique and I absolutely love it, as a entry in this contest I can not really place it as what I am looking for. Maybe I am reading it wrong though, so please do not be offended, I appreciate your time in writing this, if I have taken this wrong please do explain.
Thanks and I am sorry.

