shadowed deep
are aortic passages
overgrown, now,
with years' sorrowed brush
who will forge
that wooded way,
uncovering
my heart?
In a list
A contest entry
- Quick Indeed! by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended October 6, 2007, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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beautiful!
love the intelligent word-play in this and the take on the literal and figurative...
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Lovely piece hun, such emotion in the words. Hugs, Bunny
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wow, this was pretty deep. very nicely done. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Deeply expressive and immensely creative. Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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Your prompt is a picture - come back to the contest page and see... x
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