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Awakened by Jealously

Emotions cascading into a dream
Dreaded light
Warmth and love the attitude of my destruction

Alone with my sorrows
Tears falling onto my scarlet blade
Dripping onto the floor below

The phone shakes in my hand
Shivering, secrets unravel
Exhausted and tormented
Sleep grabs at me, pulling me down

Nightmares pound me
Whispering my unspoken fears
Sealing my fate,

The signature of death
Written across the parchment
Undoing my sacred promise

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  • brittany.geeze
    January 4, 2008

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    I like the line 'sleep grabs at me' because I dont know how many times that ive been texting someone and i forget and i fall asleep... good poem!


  • MagazinesFall
    October 12, 2007

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    i wish you didnt have to write such sad poems, try something happy.

    happy happy joy joy happy happy joy!