Animals are an example of what we should be
They love to their highest degree
Money and looks, animals don't care
They just want you to be there
Whether the animal has hooves, flippers, or paws
They all came from God
And these creatures need you
Isn't your help long overdue?
Too many animals without a loving home
Left on the streets all alone
So do something for them
And go adopt a new friend
A contest entry
- COMPASSION FOR ALL LIVING CREATURES by Tam.
800 points, ended October 10, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Wildlife In Its Natural Habitat by misticmoonlite.
475 points, ended October 14, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very good
You know if they keep going up on the animal food and care for the animals and up on everything for us its sad to say but I am afraid people arent going to be able to afford to keep pets . They have overcharged on their retail to the point people are having a hard time careing for the animals they have . Get the cost down and more animals can have good homes. I love animals I have three dogs and a cat and a bird . But it costs me over 100 dollars for their flea medicationjs and their food runs 50 its getting terrible to make ends meet when they keep going up
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I agree...animals are a gift from god and yet so many are mistreated, abused, and slaughtered I am a vegitarian cause I think it's morally wrong to eat a animal.....eewww
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This poem is excellent for this contest,thank you for entering this contest and good luck...MM
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if i wasnt already a vegetarian, i would be now excellent poem x
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An amazingly deep and caring poem! Well done my friend..
Not enough people find cause to stop and think about their surrounding, be it animal, or other..
Best of Luck !!!
Love n Hugz n All that Jazz xx Ev
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well done my dear friend and as you had said in the ending of pet adoptions - I adopted my 2 cats when they were barely 7 weeks old (brother and sister) and they are now 4 1/2 yrs old -- they wont leave my side when i am home ill with a severe migraine. many blessings always xxx
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Thank you for your beautiful entry!
This is simply lovely! Your poem flows with heart warming sentiment and I am honored to have your presence here in my contest.
I especially love your ending...suggesting adoption of a new friend! Very well done!
Your respect for creatures leaves me with a smile...and I appreciate you so very much!
I wish you peace!
Blessings! Tammy
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