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so tempting

i long to be in your arms
but i know it can never be
it will do me such harm
but it's so dang tempting!

i am told to control myself
to let you live your life how you choose
but how is someone suppose to control oneself
when all these emotions are let loose?

i have to tell myself when i get up for a new day
that to keep doing this to ourselfs would be wrong
man,it was so much easier when you were away
but you see that didn't last to long.

i know there have been times when we have given in
but,it just felt so great to have our bodies combined
alot of people believe it was all a sin
i got so sick of hearing them whine.

i let you go with my final good-bye
but we promised to always remain friends
its still very tempting to go back to that night
but i think we need to put that temptation to an end.

Author notes

about temptation kind of personal but not all of it

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  • Page Deleted
    October 16, 2007

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    i think this is very good
    it doesnt say who this is about...but (for me) i can see it being about a teacher (sighs) or even an ex-lover...its good i like it


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    October 6, 2007

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    oh sweetie, this is a good poem, i like it bunches i can feel so many things in this poem, makes you have an opeaned mind about, what this poem is about great work sweetie, i hope you do well in your contest..love cha bunches..xoxoxox