i long to be in your arms
but i know it can never be
it will do me such harm
but it's so dang tempting!
i am told to control myself
to let you live your life how you choose
but how is someone suppose to control oneself
when all these emotions are let loose?
i have to tell myself when i get up for a new day
that to keep doing this to ourselfs would be wrong
man,it was so much easier when you were away
but you see that didn't last to long.
i know there have been times when we have given in
but,it just felt so great to have our bodies combined
alot of people believe it was all a sin
i got so sick of hearing them whine.
i let you go with my final good-bye
but we promised to always remain friends
its still very tempting to go back to that night
but i think we need to put that temptation to an end.
Author notes
about temptation kind of personal but not all of it
A contest entry
- AllPoetry Extravaganza--3 Month Gold and Silver Membership by Violet Moodswing.
1500 points, ended November 28, 2007, 67 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - *Let me occupy your mind* [As you do mine] by x dont.cry.out x.
400 points, ended December 19, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i think this is very good
it doesnt say who this is about...but (for me) i can see it being about a teacher (sighs) or even an ex-lover...its good i like it -
oh sweetie, this is a good poem, i like it bunches i can feel so many things in this poem, makes you have an opeaned mind about, what this poem is about great work sweetie, i hope you do well in your contest..love cha bunches..xoxoxox

