Sweat soaked skin
smells so scented,
somewhat sweet,
callouses on your hands,
blisters on ya feet,
You call me too the hayloft; wanna take a ride,
I know what ya thinking,
I know, what's implied,
and it makes me hot, wet and horny and willing,
All your fantasy's and mine we'll be fulfilling.
A contest entry
- Ride a Cowboy .... Adult Only 18+ by Riftkin.
425 points, ended October 8, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Let me at him and that ride
for my mind is in overdrive
Riftkin -
Maybe it's me or maybe it's hormones but I felt like this could have used a little more imagination.
I think you have the right train of thought going here though and I just love the background. Talk about a six pack!!
Good luck in the contest poet! 
♥ Touchof1der -
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10 lines lol, what's a girl too do
and as for no imagination, maybe we should all leave a little more to it, imagination that is lol. Anyway I started with an x8 alliteration 
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