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My dear...

The memories that we shared
Now I must try to forget
But deep inside they’ll always remain
On that you can surely bet

And you don’t even seem to care
Oh! How you dare

to break my heart and walk away?!
And for you, now I cry every single day

Pictures of us together
Placed on the finest frames
The pain I feel looking at them
Burns like bright red flames

I shed two, three
Four, five tears
A deep sorrow embraces me
All for you… my dear…

I’m sure we were meant to be,
But you just couldn’t see
That we were made for each other
That we were meant to be the happiest human beings

But you have gone away
You left me here, crying down the rain
You left me alone, with this endless pain
Now, all I have left is my sadness
My tears…
All for you… my dear….

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  • eternal-devotion
    August 14, 2008
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    I still think that you have done a very good poem and enjoyed rereading it.

  • angelofdarkness1901
    October 7, 2007

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    wow this is really sad. I luv it. Sad poems and emo poems are like the best poems to me. Plus i luv poems about sadness and rain, they sort of just combine.

  • eternal-devotion
    October 7, 2007

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    Very well done.

    This is very well done you bring out your feelings in such a heartrending way. If you could just remember the good parts of your time with him and realise that you are young and will find another and that your life is just beginning you will be much happier. I will tell you something it is never to late to find happiness as I was 50 when I married my husband that I have now and he is the best man that I have ever been with, so you see that you can love again and have a meaningful relationship with someone else. May God bless you and help you realise your potential in life. You have a way with words that is outstanding in one so young. Keep on writing your feelings as they are a way to get on with your life and you will find peace in them someday.


  • a dying soul x
    October 7, 2007

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    OMG this is exactly what is happening to me!
    a really really good write
    you have captured the raw emotion
    ITS GREAT
    steph xx