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pressure

The ceiling is falling
The walls collapsing
Black velvet pressure
Intense on my spine

Fast moving colours
All choice and hope gone
Life slipping past me
Redemption is none

Can’t stop it building
An unholy great flow
Of pain, tears and heartache
Of which you cannot know

My life is over before it’s begun
I’m giving up what I know
For what others think I should want

Its so damn hard

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