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Last Words

As you walked away.
I screamed
I love you,
Only for you not to hear me.
I said it over and over again.
Until I was on my knees,
Saying it in between the sobs.
I love you.
Why must you leave like this?
With the razor, in my hand i ectch.
The first word, then the second, then the third.
As the world slowly fades,
With, the words
I love you
On my wrist.
When I told you I would die if I lose you,
I meant it.

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  • Procrastination
    October 6, 2007

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    Wow, this is an incredible poem. I absolutely love the final and penultimate lines, they're brilliant, it seems it's all a big a build up to that, was it meant to be?
    Chemical Kisses,
    Emily x