[this is the end]
only from words can
you form such beauty
and the ink spreads from mouth to page
creating a fantasy
but can you describe so clearly
love?
such as the immorality
in your eyes
an impurity overcoming
and blackening;
gripping your soul.
leaving you with nothing but
an empty cry.
Please tell me what you think
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lovely, honey.
the last lines were beautiful.<3
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wow.
i started to copy && paste my fave parts, but i decided the whole thing was my favorite.
very well written.
amazingly beautiful.
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wow
really cool piece
i liked it a lot
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Ohh I love this hun.
such a stunning, strong piece. very emotional. I could feel the questioning. Amazing job BB
you are so fantastic!
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Nothing quite hurts like love.
I would rather vomit nails from my bleeding stomach than to ever feel such idle and inferior emotions again.
But, it does agitate the muse and stir it into a wordly frenzy.
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Awmygod babes.
this is freakin awesome
xx
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