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Immortal (Her song)

The emotion filled melody
Helping me to drift
As she played along
Her songs own heartbeat.
Floating in what
The song let me feel
Looking back on it now
The moment is so surreal

But there you were
Playing that song
Making me feel like I did belong
Why did it have to die?

The music she played
I'll forever remember
Laying back in my bed closing my eyes
Replaying that song that made me cry.

But once sweet notes
Turn to sour
I miss her songs
I'd listen to for hours.

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