Mummies
Dancing smoothly
Upon that glowing floor
As they waltz to jazz up the fun
Everybody is getting ready-- RUN!!
They're afraid of what'll come
The spider's web is spun
Everyone sees
Mummies
Author notes
option 2 choice A
11
A contest entry
- 15 and Under ONLY ~ Win A Gold Membership in our Halloween Contest! by Amunet Wolfbane.
6000 points, ended November 14, 2007, 55 entries
Honorable mention
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very creative and you did a very good job on this form. I wasn’t too sure on the syllable count in a couple lines but upon examination I do believe you’ve gone it spot on. Great job and a fun Halloween piece!
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This is awesome!
Great job and good luck in the contest!!
xx
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this is really cool. I think this deserved the gold trophy! but congrats on your honorable mention, though! keep up your great work!
Crimson -
Wow! you really have written this poem in perfect form indeed. I could never have done such a wonderful job as you have here. Thank you for entering abd best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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Excellent job on this form in this piece. I'm impressed at how well you've captured the spirit in this and kept the flow. Bravo!
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I could actually picture this poem in my mind, so that's very well done actually
also like the form you have used here - great job!
Thanks for entering, I wish you the best of luck in this contest
Leander -
Interesting
Dancing as the title is perfect and than mummies as the first line starts out the poems setting and than at the end Everyone sees mummies. Oh I felt scarred too those mummies and the spiders web spun. So brave of you, it is almost halloween, but I hate halloween! But you did a excellent write here, good luck in the contest hun. Kelle Marie, stavykm
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holy crap!!! YOU'RE 11?!!?!?!?!? ur the BEST 11-yr-old poet i've ever (and ever will) met/meet!!! wow! you capture the feeling perfectly! omg you seem like such a beautiful person!
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