When the band stops playing
And its time to go
What happens to the love
We used to know
Those feelings of
Joy and comfort and sizzle
Slip thru your fingers
And fade to a fizzle
But they were real
Not all were cyber
We had joy and sharing
Substance and fiber
I love you more
Than you will ever know
That’s why it’s so damn hard
To let you go
But free you are now
To find your own place
Where we once soared
Around stars thru space
I give you my love
To take along now
Place it in your heart
As I take my last bow
I am a better person
From receiving your love
I will always be your friend
On earth and the stars above
Wishes54
A contest entry
- For Love by live in love.
500 points, ended October 9, 2007, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
My first contest entry, what do you think ?
Comments
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perfect!
This is soo strong to me i've just been through this type of situation, and this is the most amazing poem i've read this evening for that particular reason. the poem was very rhytmic and flowed with the greatest of ease i'm soo impressed by this poem thank you for entering it
good luck
lil
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