I see you,
you with her,
I see you with me not her.
I see us,
just you and I,
I see how you always cried.
I watch you,
in the warm and dry,
I watch you laugh and the sky, cry.
You watch her,
and I do too,
but mine are the thoughts that differ to you.
She hugs you,
you do not return,
it is just the attention you only yearn.
I see you,
you with her,
I see you with me not her.
I close my eyes,
and how I pray,
that she will not end up my way.
I watch you,
you, I dismiss,
how could you ever be like this?
I shake my head,
she's in the cold,
of the story I wrote and always told.
A contest entry
- the hardest thing is watching him i say i love you to her by HereComesTheSun.
900 points, ended June 2, 2008, 32 entries
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This is a great poem, Thanks for entering my contest, and good luck,
♥ Christina -
great job good luck
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very emotional poem
this poem was really good, didnt fully understand it but it was good x
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