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Violence in my heart

I'm always making these mistakes.
Letting people know I care.
It just hurts them more when I break their heart.

There should be a rule against people like me,
Some sort of constitution.
That forbids me leaving the house.
Or talking to anyone whos succeptable to 'love'

'Cos theres a violence in my heart baby.
I'll try my rid myself of it through you.
Take a step back and see the havoc i'll wreak.
Then run.

Before I get you.

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  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    October 8, 2007

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    ah that was awesome. another great write! i also love how you end it with just one single line...it gives the ending great impact.

    great work again


  • weebabycole
    October 6, 2007
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    i know how you feel

    its like you cant help but hurt them. great poem loved it.
    keep it up xx