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Gone forever

Trying to fit the puzzle,
Hanging on a thin thread.
Still trying to fit the puzzle,
Can't feel anything.
Everything moves so fast.
Don't have time to digest,
What's going on?

Then,I hear.
The sound of shattering glass.
Vision suddenly become blur.
I realize I'm crying.
Now  I understand.
Slowly,
Pain crawls on my skin.
Agony burns through my veins.

Now
I feel so much better
Now that you're gone forever
I tell myself
That I don't miss you at all
I'm not lying
Denying
That I feel so much better now
That you're gone forever

Author notes

um...i just wrote whatever my mind construct sentences to describe my feelings...i hope it makes sense,and i hope you like it...you can tell gemma to listen to three days grace's gone forever...the last stanza is the chorus of the song...here's the lyric http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/threedaysgrace/goneforever.html

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  • rainb0w l0ve
    November 12, 2007

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    i really liked this piece it reminds me of what i write about, and this poem reminded me also of how good it feels to get rid of someone/something in your life that only brings you down, and makes your life even harded than it already is