Study me like a prayer.
Pray for this lost soul.
This lost writer alone in her world.
Read like a book,
one page at a time.
One line.
Each sentence has it's own story.
Rightiousness is the name of the game.
I'm first in line for this challenge.
I'm under pressure,
I'm under authority.
An untamed wild heart,
waiting to bust free.
Waiting to fill the atmosphere
with rage and power.
Smoke in my lungs,
flame in my eyes,
hate in my heart,
and passion in my mind.
You will read this.
You will know me.
You'll sail to the skies
under a plague
For under the sea lies a dark dank hole.
The abyss to forever.
Don't forget this, my sweet.
Sail.. sail.
Throw away your thoughts,
your dignity,
your breath.
Live on today.
Smile on today.
This life has just begun.
Don't let it be a lie.
Don't let it be a burdon.
Live for today.
Not tomorrow.
Author notes
I don't think that this piece is all that good.
But I do like it. :]
A contest entry
- For My Favorites!!! by SummerlandRayne.
466 points, ended October 16, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Intensity in deep words! Loved the message here...the longing for freedom and to be ones self! I feel this way so often as well. Very well written my dear! Thanks for the entry and best of luck in the contest!
Love Ya
Az
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great stuff hun you're are getting better this one is much moe controlled and i loved it (:
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You must spend lots of time in bed, awake.
Some of your thoughts here are familiar.
Ih ave seen them reflecting on my brain from behind my eyes staring off into the illuminating darkness of my room.
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Thanks "awesome friend!!!" I am looking forward to it! Hope you are still doing well...miss you!
Love you~
Az -
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Finished it! :]
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