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Tender Wolf (acoustic)

Touches every soul she meets.
Encouraging words she always speaks.
Never negative, never cruel.
Deeds are done by golden rule.
Even when she’s feeling low,
Respect to all I see her show.

Wonder how I can repay,
Only thing I know to say.
Light and love live in her name.
Forever may she receive same.

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Acoustic for my dear friend Tender wolf. Get well soon, Hon.

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    December 14, 2007

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    I sit here with tears in my eyes and wish so much I could hug you these words are so beautiful and I am so touched Niaish my sister niaish


  • freespirit51
    November 17, 2007

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    AWESOME..That is all I can say. Tender wolf is my sister whom I adore and I know she loved this piece very much. I have never known anyone as wonderful and giving as she. Beautiful dedication my friend.


    • heygoo
      November 17, 2007
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      Thank you so much for the kind words.


  • Vexxxy
    November 7, 2007

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    Absolutely Lovely

    Wow. That is a beauty of a poem. Sweet flow.
    Reminded me of my grandmother and brought tears to my eyes.

  • ms. kitty kat
    November 2, 2007

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    this is such a beautiful poem for her. this well written, she is lucky to have such a wonderful & caring friend as you. I love this.

    Kat


  • capricornpoet
    October 27, 2007

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    kindness

    I've never written an accoustic, it has a rhyming feel to it, lovely tribute to a friend indeed, reminds me of those rhymes that children skip a rope to..
    inspiring , leaves an echo memory...


  • Swan song gold member
    October 14, 2007
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    This was an excellent acrostic and it had a lovely rhyme to it also. Tender Wolf is pure gold


  • galfalfa gold member
    October 8, 2007

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    Awww how sweet is this
    Love it, she's lucky to have such a caring friend,
    This will surely lift her spirits!
    galfalfa


  • singingfreedom
    October 5, 2007

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    hey! You're on! Haven't seen you in a while.

    Wow, you can write an acoustic! I've never been good at them, but you look like you can do it with ease.

    • heygoo
      October 7, 2007
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      Thank you for your words of encouragement, much needed at present.

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