Earthquakes and monsoon storms
take heed to hearts affection,
as simple songs settle upon
a soul that holds completion.
icy spirit no longer cold
as warmth becomes it's solitude,
through fervent touch upon the skin
and kisses felt from deep within.
eyes become a paralel
of mixed up maze emotions,
for tenderness between two loves
become lifes endless devotion.
and as time flies in steady pace
for them,no one could ever replace
that whom stands before them.
A contest entry
- 24 hr Quickie......Define Love in 15 lines by poet2angels.
475 points, ended October 7, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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nice feel to this piece. The nature references were very good as well icy spirits, earthquakes. nice~ Mykeee
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Very beautiful and romantic my friend!
Well done and congratulations to you on
your trophy!
Jeremy0826
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This is so sincere and beautifully done...
Such a soft romantic piece...
Excellent!
Lynda
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Beautiful write. I liked the ending the best. It makes me think of how each couple can have their own individual kind of love for each other and no matter how hard they try in future relationships, they might not be able to replicate the feeling they had when being in love. Thanks for sharing this piece. Keep writing.
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Wonderfully written, sweetie! I wish you all the very best to you in this contest!
Love ya muches!
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