i write of who i was,
as he's the only man who knows
who i've become.
he's the only one
that'd care.
Author notes
third and final poem tonight.
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haha thats really good it makes so much sense lol.
even though its only a few lines. u should read my newest poem..i think u would like it since (i think u said your a christian). -
aw, I hope someone else cares. This is really fantastic, really.
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Wow. Short piece, but extremely powerful. It felt great to read your lines- felt as if there are many more intense feelings each time I read through.
Honestly- this was awesome. Wonderful!
Take care,
Checkmate
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A very good piece expressing your own words to share how you only know.. Thanks for sharing, peace, Timothy
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I care. I know I was gone awhile...but never stopped praying for you and many others here. As always you write so well...
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In retrospect, we know ourselves only a cut below what God knows of us. I like the fact that you've delved into who you are and what you've become. I haven't done that in a while. Maybe your words are reminders for me. I know this poem touched my spirit. A lot is said here. Thanks for sharing your inner-self.
arpil -
Not as strong as your other writes, in my opinion.
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this is fascinating and very zen like
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That says it all -
I can only nod in understanding, and believe me I do understand.
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thank you.
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