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Milk Laden Promises

solitude

clouds my memory

of you

holding her

while she purrs

and laps up

your cascading rivers

of milk laden promises

 

 


 

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 14, 2008

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    Some beautiful imagery here, very tasteful. I could really imagine the situation unfold before me. I love the way it works with the prompt and sounds succulently sensual and sad at the same time.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 6, 2007

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    Nice play on words. Love the use of purr and milk relating to the cats. Lovely write with great metaphor in it's brevity.
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