remember the feel of your skin screaming yes yes my skin between your teeth your hand between my legs my eyes closed mouth open not thinking only feeling moving against you rhythmic chaos pleasure for pain my hand on your back your skin your body i could feel you i held you i grasped you reached for you squeezing feeling moving liquid feel it feel it touching being wanting
were you for real
Author notes
erotic and other options - i wrote it last night but it rly fits all 3 options
A contest entry
- Dreaming / Nightmares by Naridill.
300 points, ended October 17, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow...are you sure you are only 15? lol..just joshing ya. Very sexy and sensual although a little hard to read in this format. My favorite part was:
"my eyes closed mouth open not thinking only feeling moving against you rhythmic chaos". So true..plus the rhythmic chaos is a great example of opposites. Good work and take care. -
Ohhh, spicy! Very delightful and dreamy entry. Such a dream that exists in everyones mind. I love the images. The actually setting out could be a little neater but none the less, way quite powerful.
Thanks for entering and much luck.
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wow =) it's great
intense but vague
and you the end is brilliant
letting the question hang
i love it
seej
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I like it, I'm speechless. Great work.
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