the root cause
of all evil
oh! how true...
it breeds on temptation
the more we have of it
the more we want it
unlike food or water
ironically,
these are one of the most
essential things
to carry on
and those with money
flaunt it
some join charitable causes
but some do it
just for the fame
sure money is a good thing
but it has filled this world with doubt
deceit and deception
unlike the times
trading existed
give something and get something in return
not use soemthing
which can be gotten in a large sum
A contest entry
- Your Thoughts On Money by Cerulean Sunrise.
450 points, ended October 16, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Interesting thoughts, well expressed.
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WOW! u really spoke what was on my mind dude.. i was about to enter this contest! but i kinda didn't know how to put my words together! so yea.. i didn't!
WEll anyways, this poem was raw! it was so true! great job! and good luck in the contest!
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