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I Smell A Victory

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Shit stains
on the loo
flies swarm around
The vent doesn't work, and there is no air freshener, either
The devastation of the intestinal terrorist, is aghast, as he sprays his shitty art
With the stomach thunder rolling, a rectal storm was brewing
the end was soon
here it comes
huge turd










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Damn, I gotta go drop me a load now....
Yet, another marvelous contest, you have hosted, for us poets, causing our minds, as well as other body parts to starin....thanx

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  • Edna Sweetlove
    October 6, 2007

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    This is a very nice poem indeed. I can see that this contest has unleashed the very best in so many writers. PS devastate not devestate.


  • FaeryMouse
    October 5, 2007
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    the picture.......


  • Lost-Lezzy-15
    October 5, 2007
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    ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww