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Bloody Kiss

The violets are blue
and the roses are dead
the sugarbowls empty
and so is my head

I thought you were mine a soul full of sorrow
but in a way I just feel borrowed

Rip off my wings
and stomp on my heart
loves full of pain
but thats just the start

so as this blade slides up my wrist
I give the world one last

Bloody Kiss

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  • Drug Song
    November 13, 2007
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    very good nat
    keep wrighting
    bloop bloop


  • Kati Kat
    November 8, 2007
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    boo!
    its sad again!
    but still verrrry pretty
    so good job dollie!♥


  • moluv10
    October 9, 2007

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    Sounds like somebody did you wrong. I love the way you showed how you feel in this piece. I hope whoever upset you gets what they deserve.


  • I Am Gun
    October 8, 2007
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    yay you re-entered this one i like it alot girlie