You consume me;
{ without room for other thoughts }
addiction to the highs of scared,
excited,
comfortable exhilaration
coursing through me with every breath;
sleepless depths of desire, stirring smiles
with every brush, touched by glances'
burning lips, conversing in memories
and years to come;
that will, when every future lives
against a passion ready to settle,
palms pressed
against where we made love;
{ with Someday’s twinkle in our eyes }.
A contest entry
- 24 hr Quickie......Define Love in 15 lines by poet2angels.
475 points, ended October 7, 2007, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very nice... felt the butterflies as i read... congratz on the bronze & best wishes in
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Most beautifully written!
Congratulations on the bronze; this was most deserving!
All the best to you! -
This is breathtaking!
Such a lovely expression of love...
Great ending!
Lynda
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