I put my mouth around it
So many times, and tugged...
The ceiling is satanic-popcorn-red
Slurred, spread and cracked;
Like so many gifted friends
I count the swings of your chained -
- gold horn against beast chest.
As my ankles float above -
- my face in your face's shadow.
A contest entry
- AllPoetry's Most Well-Rounded Poet - Rounds Contest by CitrineSunrise.
600 points, ended October 15, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very sexy.
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Thank you for your submission in this contest. I look forward to your entry in Round Two which is now posted. This poem was frank and brutal and used wonderful imagery. Peace, Liz
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Horse my dear old buddy,how the fuck are you? Interesting piece of literature you have here.Guess what! Like your guest book entry on my page says that i am just lonely. Well not any more. I have found true love on A.P and we are getting married.I'm so happy i just had to share the great news with all my favorites here on A.P. Look her up her name is HeartsAFire. Now be nice and behave because i am going to unblock you now ! Take care and oh ya great write ! Chio !
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It's ciao, not "chio", congrats and good luck.
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Your last line stunned me.
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Makes me think of a cheap hotel room somewhere in the nastiest parts of Hollywood. Maybe someone who went out there with stars in their eyes and didn't get what they dreamed of and needed to survive. Just my thoughts.
Anna -
sexy
i'm not sure if the imagery i'm getting is what i should be thiking... perhaps i just need to see it... am i confused.. yes i am
who's eyes is this through darling?
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Mine, I was a prostitute.
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Wow. That was absolutely stunning. You have a true gift with words.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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The ceiling is satanic-red-popcorn. You can buy stuff like this...you never cease to amaze me with your words! Write on!
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