I see the stars in front of me
I can see the little bug, crawling over there
But why can't I see you
Youv'e always been here
So why not sooner?
Why is there always a wait limit on everything
and do you always have to make seem longer
i can't help falling for you
But do you love me too? :C
What do you think?
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Hmm...
It's good.... mystique.... maybe a little too mystique.... the first couple line are a little weird.... but I think i got it.... very nice.... I'd suggest trying to keep lines around the same length.... the htree longer lines mess with the flow of reading a little, but other than that very nice....
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