Circle frees heart to curve in teardrop,
shape so sacred, I swill in awe,
my blue eyes embracing, all inside you.
I am heaven sent, light in lips of laughter,
a quake so deep, you feel my tremble
walking within, as sovereign savior,
to taste this day, once more, to gather.
Hold me in your highest places,
petal fresh, and delicate to master,
dancing word in feather's nuance,
beyond our gift of earthen pleasure,
so pure to bare, as cosmic center;
for we are flowered gratitude, pollinating
soulful dreams we spin, as heaven's chalice,
our innocence blushing, eternal opus.
A contest entry
- 24 hr Quickie......Define Love in 15 lines by poet2angels.
475 points, ended October 7, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I asked for emotion and love defined in pretty poetic lines and you have done more than that...This is amazing...
sigh~
Lynda
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Oh I do, I do remember this:
" am heaven sent, light in lips of laughter,
a quake so deep, you feel my tremble"
and when sobs shook me....there was his hand on my heart to keep me from fallign compeltely apart.
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The innocence of love lights these words, where you find so much beauty to bless, "to taste this day, once more to gather." What better place for words to garner romance and delight? ~ K
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"I am heaven sent, to light in laughter,
a quake so deep, you feel my tremble"
This is golden, my Friend. Pure & simple. Beautifully penned, Sweetie. Good luck in Lynda's contest. 
Wanda
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