16 years of beauty
16 years of grace
16 years to mature
and happiness on your face
You've grown so much
It's true
You are so beautiful
any guy would be lucky to have you
Once you were a child
so precious and great
Now you'll soon be a lady
And you'll appreciate
The good that God's done
He's worked miracles in your life
He's brought you so much peace
And kept you away from strife
Now you're a precious flower
Almost in full bloom
You've Christ in your heart
and in him you are consumed
HAPPY B-DAY
Author notes
HAPPY HAPPY B-day. I wrote this for Daughter of Christ, and partially for me
A contest entry
- Sweet 16!- Make me Happy! by RuLives4GodOnly.
350 points, ended October 16, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - It's My Birthday! Help Me Celebrate!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
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a good poem which sends messages of hope on a birthday for the them and to make the self happier in life for giving makes us smile.
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a birthday indeed is a very lovely time & very special for those who have it and those who love them around the person.
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it's beautiful. You're a great writer.
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so sweet girly! Beautiful write!!!
~Michaela~
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Awww. This was very sweet. A very wonderful and heart-felt birthday poem. Sure enough to put a big smile on her face. As far as the east is from the west, I am sure that's how big her smile is upon her face. This was truly a blessing to read. God Bless You!!
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww wish i thugh of dis...den i really could impress her!!!!!!!!!! lolz..great write holly
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nice poem...thats all i can say
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hOLLY, hOLLY, hOLLY! Thanks so much for this heartfelt piece! I LOVED it! My favorite stazna would have to be the last one:
"Now you're a precious flower
Almost in full bloom
You've Christ in your heart
and in him you are consumed
HAPPY B-DAY"
Thanks agin chick! Luv ya!
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