Superfluous hail-
The iced melons fall to earth,
And cause destruction.
Author notes
This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse.
A contest entry
- Best of the Best on group page; Haiku by InBetweenThoughts 14 poets listed only by InBetweenThoughts.
1550 points, ended October 21, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Thank you for your Haiku
I'm dodging those melons......could be a serious headache! Good form and counts, best wishes, Ken IBT
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Excellent
this is just a down right superb poem and I really love the lay out for this poem you really added a depth and quality to it. nice job and keep it up
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