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Solitary Egret

A Lonely Egret
Stands in the ocean's bright foam-
The only one left.

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This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse.

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  • InBetweenThoughts
    October 21, 2007

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    A wonderful Haiku...sad thoughts are brought to one as one day this may become a reality with man's ever esculating population and other realities brought down upon nature's intrusion. Good form and counts, best wishes, Ken IBT


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 8, 2007

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    This is just another thang od beauty you have posted here in a haiku form. I really love the depth and flow through out this poem and really admire the quality of the p0oem as wlel. nice work and kepe it up