In pink sunsets on rocky shore,
troubles washed away with ebb tide.
Holding you close forever more,
you'll always be my loving bride.
Two souls united we've become,
our love will ne'er be denied.
Making my heart beat like a drum,
you'll always be my loving bride.
The passion felt in kisses soft,
explode when galaxies collide.
And as your sweet scent to me wafts,
you'll always be my loving bride.
In pink sunsets on rocky shore
you'll always be my loving bride.
Author notes
seamaiden
Picture inspiration from the original contest.
Kyrielle Sonnet
A Kyrielle Sonnet consists of 14 lines (three rhyming quatrain stanzas and a non-rhyming couplet). Just like the traditional Kyrielle poem, the Kyrielle Sonnet also has a repeating line or phrase as a refrain (usually appearing as the last line of each stanza). Each line within the Kyrielle Sonnet consists of only eight syllables. French poetry forms have a tendency to link back to the beginning of the poem, so common practice is to use the first and last line of the first quatrain as the ending couplet. This would also re-enforce the refrain within the poem. Therefore, a good rhyming scheme
for a Kyrielle Sonnet would be: AabB, ccbB, ddbB, AB -or- AbaB, cbcB, dbdB, AB.
Source for this form is: shadowpoetry.com
A contest entry
- Just From your heart by HeavenonEarth.
700 points, ended October 6, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For Poets With No More Then 10 Trophys Hm's Dont Count by Starz of Heaven.
525 points, ended October 18, 2007, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I want Gold Trophy Winners Judged by RedwingSpirit.
900 points, ended January 11, 2008, 58 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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seamaiden Wonderful poem Dear this is a really nice form poetry. I wish you the best of luck in my contest thanks for entering
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I love both of the forms and to combine them is like magic. I'm glad you liked this one so much. It is a special one. Thank you for the applause and your words so kind. They are greatly appreciated. seamaiden ♥
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Wonderfully done
I m one that loves good, GOOD, rhyme in poetry,that flows with the ease of the blood in our veins, and this did just that. Then I got to the end and seems something was forgotten, like two lines and I thought what a shame, it was going so beautifully. Then I saw of course the explanation of the form..and in that reffirmed my first opinion that this was a lovely work, well done,
Evan
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A wonderful poem, no doubt this is a winning piece
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Lovely write my friend....
congratulations as well on your trophies...well deserved it not more...loved this.
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This is a very beautiful poem. Congratulations on winning gold and HM trophis for this poem. They both were well-deserved. I loved this poem. God bless you in all you and write, and keep up the excellent work my fellow poet friend.
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Thank you for your kind words and I'm glad you liked this. Keep writing poet.
seamaiden ♥
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A very well written piece of poetry. I love the fact that the poem expresses so much love and hope, that sort of thig is lacking these days. I am learning so much from fellow poets on AP, including about different structures and ways of writing. Thank you for sharing beautiful words and some knowledge.
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I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. Kyrielles are a lovely form and so are sonnets. Thank you for the applause and your words so kind. They are greatly appreciated. seamaiden ♥
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Ok I know absolutely nothing about poetic forms but that was so excellent! I love the repetition and the imagery and the word usage I am still floating on the words that you have painted so beautifuly! *sigh*
Lauren
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Sonnets and kyrielles are both lovely forms and to have them combined is music to the ears when done right. Thank you for the applause and your kind words. They are greatly appreciated. seamaiden ♥
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Wow. THis was wonderful.I liked it a lot even though I don't know much about poetic forms, and congrats on the HM and Gold well deserved.
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Sonnets are a lovely form and then to combine it with a kyrielle is double the pleasure. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the congrats and your kind words. They are greatly appreciated. seamaiden ♥
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Wonderful and beautiful poem....A very lucky bride!
like the emotions here and i see you have lined up trophies for this one..Congrats!
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This is a wonderful form for love. Thank you for the applause and such kind words of praise. They are greatly appreciated. Thank you for the congrats on the trophies. This was special for another reason. seamaiden ♥
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Oh I cannot believe you have so many trophy's Well deserved though!!!
I loved this part:
Two souls united we've become,
our love will ne'er be denied.
Making my heart beat like a drum,
you'll always be my loving bride.
The passion felt in kisses soft,
explode when galaxies collide.
And as your sweet scent to me wafts,
you'll always be my loving bride.
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This one was special and he loved it, that was my gold. Not the trophy I got. lol Thank you for the kind words. They are greatly appreciated. seamaiden ♥
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stunningly beautiful write, congrats on both trophies, they were definately well deserved. then again i love anything to do with pink [if you;ve seen my page hehe]
but really lovely
Tasha
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Kyrielles are wonderful form poems and the addition of the sonnet form to it makes it more so. Thank you for the congratulations, the applause and your kind words. I have seen the pink. lol seamaiden ♥
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This is a very beautiful poem oh my gosh I hate to say this you did not follow the ruules though please put your user name in your Authors notes and I will be back and if it is not there I will have to remove your poem.
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I have corrected that and I am sorry for the confusion. I'm glad I got back in time. Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you like this one. It is special. seamaiden ♥
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Excellent Form!
Back around with a friend to do some prelim judging and make a more in depth comment.Great job with the form loved the fact that you used the imagery of the photo for this penning perfection.
"The passion felt in kisses soft,
explode when galaxies collide."
Thank you for entering the contest & all the best in the comp
Blessings~
~Joy
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I love form poetry and this was a good form to use for the picture you had. It was very inspirational and I'm glad that you liked it. Thank you for the applause and best wishes, they are very encouraging. Thank you for hosting too. seamaiden ♥
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what a beautiful poem. I truly liked it. Nice flow and great penn.
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I'm glad that you enjoyed this form. I do like writing form poetry and have only done a little free verse. Thank you for your kind words. They are greatly appreciated. seamaiden ♥
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