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Tim Jacobs

I did not want to accept you,
I denied the love you gave me like some damn fool.
You kept pushing and shoving and gave me a hell of a fight,
and no matter what you still came running when i was scared at night.
You taught me things like how to hunt and the game of chess.
All you ever wanted for me was the very best.
Unfortunatly you were not there the night I was concieved,
but fortunatly you were there for the molding of me.
The man who gave me life was never there for me,
but thats okay 'cause I had you, the very best Dad there could ever be!!!!!

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  • VanityAngst
    October 5, 2007

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    OMG!

    this was amazing. what i am about to tell you is constructive critisim i swear. this write was so great but maybe you could put moments that you remembered and instances when you were gald he was around and upset when hes not. but he was such an amazing person and we were so blessed to have him in each and every one of our lifes. Tim Jacobs...wow. My Grandfather and I was so happy he was. i couldnt have ever asked for a better one. Anyways great write dad. I wanted to cry uncontrollably, but it did jerk a tear or two. R.I.P. Grandpa WE LOVE YOU!!!