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Tonight

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Tonight

By: Mrs. Lady Enthralling

 

 

Respect my nakedness

as I undress before you

walking in tip toeing silence.

Wooden floors

deep sensual patterns of my metaphors

shiver

deliver

my methadone

 as you think in addiction.

I don’t want this to be over

come now

 and let me feed your dry eyes

tears of my lubricating visine.

Hiding and gliding

 in to jammed nakedness

as I can barely breath.

Tonight I will let you hear my voice

give your brain a blow torch

so tempting as

 tongue rings

 massage your erected dreams.

I like bed springs

that squeak in heat

of getting it on.

Tonight I will talk lust to you

 in voices relaxing you

 taxing your lips

foreclosing those pants

 down from the clinging of your hips.

Tonight you will hear the thunder crying in

boom

boom.

I

can’t

wait

until

tonight

when I can see the sight

of you

shiver

and

shaking

releasing a vanilla white shake.

Tonight

I want you to hike my mountains

deposit my love

 for bad times in need.

Tonight

I will play tricks on your mind

just come let me flee my crime

of the softness of my behind

50 miles per hour.

The Paris tower

is in need of sexing me

just this one night.

I want to drag you on my chain

pay

obey

everything I say.

As tonight

I creep in heat

looking for discreet

desire just this one time

 only for this one night.

 

 

T

O

N

I

G

H

T

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© Julia L. Clark Registration Number Txu 1 - 259- 764, All rights reserved

 

 

Author notes

~ Tonight~
Is a mixture of spoken word with a little of sexual spunk.
One of my favorite poems

Mrs. Enthralling

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Tonight

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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    January 12

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    I like the way this one shot from the hip in the very begining..."respect my nakedness"...this is a very hot and sensual poem, sweetie...


  • cory.bentley
    December 22, 2008

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    A+++

    WOAH. Great imagery projected in this piece. Sexual but not over the top. Very beautifully written. great usuage of words and lines, I will look foward to reading more of your work. Keep up the great work and take care.

    - Cory Bentley

  • mcfreeman
    June 14, 2008
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    I can HEAR this


  • Galaxy2
    March 5, 2008

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    This one-night sex offer is really thrilling honey!...
    You mesmerised me by your wonderfully composed lines as...
    'Respect my nakedness...
    as I undress...' (What an idea!)
    'Let me feed your dry eyes' (How passionate!)
    'Tonight I'll talk lust
    to you' (Wow! looking forward to it...)
    '...jammed nakedness' (Beautiful and unique expression!)...
    '...as tongue rings massage your erected dreams' (How erotic!...makes me horny)
    'I like bed springs
    that squeak in heat
    of getting it on' (Very suggestive!)
    'foreclosing those pants down
    from the clinging of your hips' (Nice description)
    'Tonight
    I want you to hike my mountains'... (The loveliest offer of my life...lol!)
    'I'll play tricks on your mind' (Please, do!)
    'Just come let me flee my crime
    of the softness of my behind' (Who would not accept the generous offer!)
    'I want to drag you on my chain
    Pay
    Obey
    everything I say' (I will...I will...lol)...

    What a sensatinal erotica by such a sweetie!

    Kisses all over, my dear!

    Galaxy2


  • AngelicSinz
    February 3, 2008
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    awwww juju this piece was beautiful makes me wanna come over ta see ya! many hugs my dear


  • secberm
    January 17, 2008

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    Sexual/sensual. Erotic but not pornographic. A display of a healthy appetite. Common to most but only a few can express this the way you do. Beautiful.

    I like bed springs
    that squeak in heat

    Nice...

    DEZ


  • Latarsha Jenkins
    November 16, 2007
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    Now that is the Lady J I grew to love


  • lilith78
    November 4, 2007

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    'Respect my nakedness' . . . that is a powerful statement! "I creep in heat, looking for discreet desire" - very sensual! Best of luck in the contest!


  • crystallynnbradford
    October 30, 2007
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    love it love it love it....OMG!! I fucking love it beyond all compare!

  • almostgone
    October 22, 2007

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    Very hot honey. This must have been what you were talking about. I love it and I love you as well. MMMMmmmmm...


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling
      October 22, 2007
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      no honey but thanks this is my favorite to i will be sure to send you the links now
      muah...


  • lovelifelive gold member
    October 12, 2007

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    A poem full of promising pleasure, flowing freely into sexual.Very well done on a hot and clean write.
    best of luck in contest.
    Cori


  • darell
    October 10, 2007

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    Ummm yeah baby!

    Yes but not just one night alone will do because
    I have a lot of sexing to impress on you.
    Totally surrendered sensual delight as we
    make love under candlelight. Moans of chorus
    groans that postpone the melodies of passion
    bliss with each frenchkiss in eagerness with
    tongues blazing hot like fire with body delicious
    desire. Come enter my chamber of weeping willows
    and let me dry your eyes of crying lust until
    you bust with come daddy come!


  • Mykeee
    October 10, 2007

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    WOW!!! talk about a Litney of Metaphors and sexual excitment. Very well done. Stuck to the script too Thanks so much


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling
      October 10, 2007
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      thanks dear as i was honored to enter my live spoken piece that will be performed this week thanks


  • kennethlaney
    October 5, 2007

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    Very good

    I'm glad that was without being bad baby! The powem is there! Check your messages the number is there and I sent the poem ass well.


  • Mizz HighHeel Class
    October 5, 2007

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    this was hot! the way you penn this it shows that you have flow from every direction good luck in the contest it was a nice write


  • Ephiphany
    October 5, 2007

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    WoW...Lovie

    cool breezes of tempting sensations here
    Tonight is a MUST perform request made by Me.
    Loved the rich tones, and fullness in this piece.

    Great metaphonrs on the imagery...very pleasureable...VERY

    EyeCandy for the Ears


    ephiphany

    • Mrs LadyEnthralling
      October 5, 2007
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      muah.. i am so glad i got your attention on this i shall start trying to remeber it as sat is write around the corner awe i love you


      • Ephiphany
        October 5, 2007
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        Wish I could be there for the

        performance...but I'm sure you will do wonderful.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 5, 2007

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    oh no no,,,, i need to take thisone over the edge lmao...a clean making love piece...LMAO its always messy when i do it
    of course i like wearing the coat...and well...i will leave that all alone
    great job here girl.

    always
    Tory

    • Mrs LadyEnthralling
      October 5, 2007
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      dont laugh at me passion im trying to behave here i can just bet you a naughty piece of art work as you are Mrs. Griswold so i know your private thing must be you thanks honey muah...

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