I know it's time
but I am not yet ready
how can I be prepared
for this?
I knew I would lose you
and move on without you
but the part of my life
you filled
will be empty forever
I do not weep for you
you are happy
to be free of worldly pain
and to return to God.
I have no fear for you
only assurance that we will
embrace again
It is I who hurt now
for I can no longer come to you
for a kind word, a smile, a hug
a little push when I need it,
the way you shared my happiness,
and strengthened me when I was fallen,
My life is the poorer
for want of you
The tears are for me
A contest entry
- Dedicated to my father who just lost his own father(PREWRITES ARE WELCOME) by badddgirl.
550 points, ended October 16, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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*tear*
this really made me cry. It reminded me of when I lost my father and things I wish I had known how to say back then. A great poem!
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This is awesome and beautiful!
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Beautiful!
Wow, this is very honest and heartfelt, I thank you so very much.
I do not weep for you
you are happy
to be free of worldly pain
and to return to God.



