This poem is
"So cliche"
For god hates me,
Life sucks,
I'm dying inside,
and I can't find myself
Oh no, I can't find myself.
I'm looking for the silver lining
While I'm cruising down
This highway of life.
I'm falling off the edge of a cliff
But I am saved by the love of my life.
Oh yes, the love of my life.
My life is a winding road
And I see my life pass before my eyes
My friends are my angels
And I'm living in paradise
Ah yes, living in paradise.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
cool!
oh yes, this poem was VERY cliche, lol!!! really good piece though, fun and whitty. i liked the whole thing, not just particular parts. -
"This poem is
"So cliche""
I like that line.
In an odd way it adds depth and brings it to reality.
Without it the poem wouldn't be the same.
Good Job.
-
Well done
Adding your comment:
