You think my life is easy,
Well, just step into my world.
Where all these crazy thoughts,
They torture, kill this little girl.
The one that lives inside of me,
The one that was so sweet.
The one you could be proud of,
And the one you'd like to meet.
The one that was destroyed,
The day I gave it all away.
The one I killed and tortured,
On that one last fateful day.
The one last day of innocence,
The one last day of peace.
The one last day of loving life,
That girl is now deceased.
I killed her with a crackpipe,
And I killed her with a bowl.
I killed her with a blowjob,
On the day I sold my soul.
I sold it to a crackhead,
Who gave nothing back to me.
I sold it for a second hit,
Without a guarantee.
I sold it to be happy,
But instead it killed my heart.
I sold my soul to crackheads,
So let's watch my soul depart.
You think my life is easy?
Well you've finally seen my pain.
Yeah. I think my life is perfect,
As a candle in the rain.
Please tell me what you think
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this is good. i really like how much emotion you put into it, and it's obvious that it's genuine. it's also cool how you repeated certain phrases like "i sold it" and "the one", i think it really emphasized your point
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Very heartfelt and soul-bearing. I think it flows well, the end rhyme is a nit cliche, but if that your thing then thats cool.
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sorry about my freaking spelling errors...a few too many glasses of wine!
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Reading this one and refecting on the message within, what comes across loud and clear is depression an pain. There are those who don't understand how hard it is to walk in darkness and cloudy days. You have described it well along with a powerful expression of anger. Aloha to you and yours from out here in paradise.. alisa
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