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rEVOLution

Lost with in this colurful dream
And I can't get out.
But do I really want to?
I guess that being a dreamer
Can save you from the reality.
Not doing what your told
But doing what you want
Is a dream come true for every one,
Even those that want to be free.

When that rock starts to roll
I'll know
When its time to go.
To tell the others:

'The time is now!
Rise up with me
If you want to be Free!
From the shackles of reality.'

The army will come
And we'll make it happen
Just wait till you see
'Cause the time is now!
Together and forever.
So come and we'll be free
From this day forward and onward
We will, just wait and see.

Author notes

This is another one of my fast poems.

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  • Undead Dark Rose
    October 16, 2007
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    wow i love it wow


  • iamthebeatles
    October 7, 2007
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    Kelsey I am impressed. This poem is great. One of your best!

  • ea silver member
    October 6, 2007

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    I like the passion here and the mention of colors; I appreciate spontaneous writes and this contest will allow for more than one entry, if you find yourself inspired again. Thank you.