Usually it takes someone
Weeks, months, years
To recognize the true nature
Of another
But how fortunate was I
To learn of you only days
After became acquainted
And find out that you
Were not at all who
I believed you to be
How fascinating that I
Barely know you, yet now
I know you are a
Liar.
A contest entry
- don't rush 2 by layla..
300 points, ended October 26, 2007, 12 entries
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yeah ervision required in line 9. this is good. you have used the prompt properly. thanks for entering. good luck!
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line nine- were
i liked the brash approach. this one grabbed me for a second but theres nothing to keep my attention. i dont know. not great. not bad.
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