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Discovery

If I could have a day
with anything to try

I'd like to have a day
to be lost in your eyes

To peer deep in a soul
and have your trust to confide

To make me feel amazed
at the beauty that does reside

Searching for your heart
with so much love locked inside

I have a plan to set it free
with a key no one else has tried

I will show you what it's like
to be in a love that's here to stay

Without all the pain and sorrow
that you've experienced along the way

If you can forget what's in your past
and learn to live with me here today

We can make something out of this life
that will only get better every day

Author notes

I wrote this a while back for someone...and never posted it, since I'm going through some horrible writers block I thought I would stick it on here.

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  • lucidity
    October 27, 2007
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    I can't write much anymore either. anyways, it's very sweet and caring. who's it about?

  • StarDust23
    October 7, 2007

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    Beautiful.

    Hey Sweety...I don't know who this is for..but it's beautiful. It brought tears to my eyes..but then again..everything you write does.